"Relativity" By Sexylion
The Usagi and Mamoru Fanfiction Archive
Synopsis by Mac's
This is a very long, very well-written story that
takes place in the future crystal tokyo. King Endymion becomes trapped
by a young girl who is convinced she loves him and none of the senshi are
able to free him. The story takes you through the thoughts of the king
while he is trapped and how the Neo-Queen and the other Senshi deal with
it. This story is about True and Unconditional Love, If you are looking
for kisses and dates, this is not the story for you.
Rating: Out of five stars!
||A very interesting and very complex plot. Extremely
well thought out and very deep with emotion.
||The story lacks romance in the classical sense
of dates and flowers, but it is ok because that is not the focus of the
story. As far as love goes, it is prevalent in every sentence.
|Descriptive / Dialogue
||There is not a lot of dialogue because the story
is mostly the thoughts of the characters. The descriptions sometimes get
a little long and distract from the flow of the story. The vocabulary and
overall style is excelent.
||Despite the few things that I think could be improved
I still feel that this is an excellent work of literature with a compelling
story that will keep you on your toes. It's great length only makes you
apreciate the ending even more.